Tuesday, March 13, 2018

Draft

Theresia Sitinjak

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Jonah's Life

Once upon a time, there were an old man with his 3 sons. His name is Jonah and his 3 sons are Joe, Jim, and Jerh. Joe is the oldest of them, and Jerh is the youngest. They lived in a house in small rural with nobody live there. The rural was in the middle of forest. The house is the one and only property that they had after the father had bankrupt when his son still child. They move to that house and live in there. They force themselves to accustom with the condition that they had. Every day, the father taught his children, Joe, Jim, and Jerh, to haunt, to farm, and use the nature as their source of life.

One day, the father asked his youngest, Jerh, to get some fruits and vegetables in the forest. But his son met an old lady and gave all the fruits and the vegetables that he had to her. In the morning, Jerh arrived at home and he wanted to tell what he did to his father. He thought his father will proud of him but the father disappointed with his youngest son action because Jerh did not bring anything to them. Whereas Jerh thought that what he did is a good thing as he is a man.

In the next two months, when it was the end of winter session. The father asked his sons to go haunt. But, Jonah already not believe with his son Jerh of what he did in two months ago. He still felt disappointed with him. Jonah order Jerh to stay at home and just play in the home while they are haunting. The favorite thing that Jerh do when it is winter is make a fire in the furnace. It was unexpected that when Jerh playing with the fire, the ember flung into the curtain. It caused fire in their house. Jerh successful to rescue himself. But when the father came home, and see the fire at the house with Jerh in front of the house he became angry and out of control. He disappointed with Jerh for second times. He was angry and chase away Jerh from the house.

Short Story

Jihan Trisharoline H.T
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It was raining that day, an old man was sitting in front of his home wondering why his wife hadn't come home yet. Usually, she'll come back at this rate. It was 6 in the evening, and the rain just getting harder indicating that it won't stop in hour. Still waiting outside, the man didn't realize that the sun was already down. He want to pick her up, but he can't. He had an argument earlier. He knew he was wrong, but his ego wasn't let him doing it. He shouldn't behave like that to her. He was so cruel to his wife earlier.

Draft

Karma

(Geovani Budisari)

 

            The clock shows that the time is already 4:00 PM. Since it is winter, he has not taken bath for two days. Finally today he wants to clean himself. He grabs his stick which is beside his bed. He struggles a lot to stand up, using the stick he grabbed before. His old body no longer can endure his own body weight. With his body trembling, he has arrived at his bathub. The beautiful white bathub now has changed into yellowish since no one cleans it.

            After waiting for the water, he slowly gets into the bathub. The water is so warm, making him so comfortable. He starts to wash his body with solid soap that is almost finished. When he looks to his wrinkled hands, his tears start falling. "Look at all this wrinkles, I'm so old", he says. He looks around. "This murky bathroom, it makes me feel so lonely", he added. He cannot hold his tears. He lifts his head and stares to the ceiling, so his tears can stop falling.

            Three minutes passed. Five minutes passed. He starts to recall his memory when he still had everything to cheer up himself. He was one of the founders of a famous retail company. When he just started it, he was full of passion. He built the company together with his two friends. Ten years passes, he had not been satisfied although he already had a big home at downtown, some fancy cars, and of course a family. He misses that time, when he loved her family at the fullest and was grateful with all he had.

            Until one day, he betrayed his two friends.


Short Story Draft

".....Found the body of a woman known to be Martha Abellson, a general hospital doctor, in a fish pond in a city park. The police said that this was an act of premeditated murder. The murder was thought to have happened around 1 am earlier, there is no sign of physical violence on the body and the face of the victim, but... "The woman's reporter paused to swallow with an uncovered panic. "The face and the body of her is skinny and wrinkled of the blood clot caused in the reckoning by hundreds of leeches are now their size is as fat as purple eggplants and... And her tongue is gone."
On a long journey from the city of London, deep into the forest, across a creek, and through a valley with a steep ravine, there is a life of peace and quiet. There was an old little cottage where there sat an old man in his late seventies who sat back in his old rocking chair. He smoked a cigar from his pipe, observing the smoke coming out and spreading before his eyes. The smoke seemed to form a familiar face, which made him sad.
"Dr. Abellson is known as a good woman and has no enemies during her career, but recently it heard the news that Dr Marta had killed her patient for a misdiagnosis. Now the police are on the lookout for the patient's data and searching for his family's allegedly assassinations."
"Old Daddy John!" cried a voice. "You owe us a story."
Then Old Daddy John woke up from his reverie.
Every day in the morning, little children had gathered and sat on the porch of his cabin. They watched him smoked cigars and sighed before they cried to tell a story.
"Oh, naughty kids, what should I tell you? I've told you everything I know and now it's your turn. Tell me what your goals are. Old Daddy John wants to know." 
The children told one by one with a burning spirit. Some aspired to be teachers, pilots, polices, farmers, and more. But what intrigued him was a pretty little girl who said, "I'll be a doctor." And at that moment Old Daddy John remembered an old memory. Then he told a story.
"Once in this village there was a happy family consisting only father and his son. When the boy was 17 years old, he told his father to work in town....."
His son is a treasure and a life for the father. When the departure date had been set, the child got sick for a whole week. The father took his son to the hospital by passing through the valley, ravine, river and forest. The doctor was a woman about 35 years old, he examined the boy in less than a minute and told the father, "Your child has end-stage renal failure." She tried to comfort the father with his happy smile as she said it, a happy smile as if she had just won a lottery.
The father and his son came home. The boy was always taking large-sized medicine—5 until 7 once a drink. There was a small size, but the boy said "this little guy is the bitterest." His muscular and large body, now turned drastically thin and pale. The medicine did not make him better but worse.
And the worst thing came. The boy vomited and his body was so hot. The father did not know what to do because his son's body was weak like a boneless fish. Finally he took his son to the same hospital and his son was examined by a different doctor.
"Have your son been treated before?" asked the doctor.
"Not yet," lied the father. 
"He's suffering typhoid, but it's now very bad, Sir."
The father took his son home because he did not have the cost to pay for all the advanced medicines and treatments. But unlucky, the child died on the way home. His only hope, happiness, and future had gone forever.
After the death of his son, he determined to take revenge. For days, weeks, and months he roamed the gardens looking for leeches. And after collecting ten full jars, he kept in the house. Then he went to town and kidnapped a doctor who misdiagnosed his son and took her to his hut. The female doctor was her mouth in a gag, and her legs and hands tied with rope. In the dim light of the full light coming in from the crevices of the broken window, the Doctor's body wriggled in disgust and fear as her whole body were filled with leeches, sucking on her blood—sucking on her life. One by one the leech broke away after their bodies were as fat as  purple eggplants.
"Ah I forgot one thing, that good father cut off the doctor's tongue in return so she will never make a wrong diagnostic... Again." Old Daddy John ended.
The little girl who initially aspired to be a doctor looked moody and said, "then I'll be a teacher." Old Daddy John smiled.
"What happened to the father then? Was he arrested and taken away?" asked an innocent boy. 
"Of course yes," answer another boy boldly. 
"Is he alive?" asked another innocent boy. 
"Yes," said a child knowingly.
"What is he doing now?"
"Maybe he's taking a nap, or sitting in an old rocking chair, holding a cigar, and telling story to naughty kids like us."
Old Daddy John smiled again.
One child thought hardly, looked at Old Daddy John and said, "Is that you?"
Suddenly it rained heavily, and the children went running to their homes after saying goodbye and grateful for the story from Old Daddy John. They promised to come back tomorrow morning,  and the next tomorrow morning, and the next tomorrow morning again.
Old Daddy John sucked on his cigar, emitting a faint smoke forming a familiar-looking face again.

Draft

Name: Novia Sitorus

                                                                                                NIM   : 13020115120001

 

Due to Wrong Words

            An elderly man with wrinkled skin and black hair that almost whitened in his head was reading today's news on a mahogany rocking chair. The old age makes him have to wear glasses to read the newspaper every day. The cool and fresh air in the morning in his village he enjoyed with the steaming hot milk coffee made by his beloved wife. Mr. Croft, or better known as Mr. Edgard Bancroft, is a retired mathematics teacher at a primary school. He has a wife who loves him that Mrs. Masta Vattany works as a caterer near her home. Mrs. Vattan works when there is a big party celebration, so it is not too much trouble in taking care of house chores.

            They are not blessed with children, so they take other ways by lifting children from Mrs. Vattan's cousin who now lives in the next village. Evan who is the adopted son of Mr. Croft and Mrs. Vattan is 10 years old. This family life can be called a simple family. They depend on the pensioners' money and the catering. As a financial supporter in fulfilling daily needs, Mr. Croft's family keeps livestock such as chickens, ducks, geese, rabbits, and goats. Various animals that they keep, Mr. Croft prefer to keep the chicken because since childhood his father taught to keep chickens. He thinks the chicken is a good source of good fortune to him because every morning the chicken that wakes him from his sleep, is an egg producer to sell for additional income and the meat can be consumed as well.

            One day, after returning to school, Evan saw a rooster tied up next to his house, rushing to release the chicken while thinking that the chicken could disturb his favorite animal, the rabbit. Without thinking long, Evan chased the chicken away, hearing the sound of chickens going outside made Mr. Croft come out of the house and see what happened there that the chicken he had bought in the market had disappeared due to a nosy act from Evan. Mr. Croft is angry with his son for the ignorance because the chicken is very important for him to use today. He intentionally bought the chicken because of his wife's request on their wedding anniversary. They always choose chicken as the main course to celebrate the wedding anniversary because they believe the chicken gives good fortune to their family.

            This afternoon his wife is going to her aunt's party in the next village and will be home late in the afternoon. It's hard for him to find such a good cock like that in his village. He had to wait about 3 months because the chicken order took a long time. Mr. Croft smacked Evan and said words he did not have to say. Hearing these words made the boy's heart sad and rushed into the house while crying. He did not expect the words of his father in the afternoon. "No wonder my father did not like me so far this turned out to be the answer I was looking for", think Evan. See this situation, Mr. Croft more confused and worried about his words to his son. If his wife finds out about this problem then his wife will be furious even there will be a great quarrel between them. He should not have been able to say that to Evan even though he was very angry about his foster child's annoyance. The disappointment cannot control his emotions surrounding the mind of Mr. Croft.


Draft


"I'm home ..."

Mia, the twenty five-year-old girl was seen taking off her boots and putting them on a shelf neatly displayed at the door. Then she turned her gaze to her father, Mr. Philip in the bamboo chair. She stared blankly at the wide-spread field in front of him. Finding that the old man was still unaware of her presence, she could only take a deep breath and walked her way into the kitchen to prepare dinner. In the midst of her busy, the woman stared down at her old dad's back from behind the kitchen. It was not a new thing for Mia to find her father who continued to be in his world. In the morning when Mia was about to leave for the field, he already sat idly and accompanied by a flock of birds perched on the top of yellow rice buds. Likewise as twilight began to decorate the expanse of sky blue in the village of Bamburgh, the old man was still unmoved in the same position.

This scene had been going on since he lost his first son. Gary, that's how Mia's brother name, was found murdered in a city street alley a few months ago. Two years ago, he released his only son who dreamed of becoming a successful trader in the capital. Of course, at first, he did not allow his son urbanize to the city because he wanted his son became a successor to his business in coffee and tobacco plantations. Moreover, he was worried to let him go in the midst of a city that had a high crime rate. Yet, his hard hearts melt instantly considering Gary who was a submissive boy and never demanded anything other than that.

"Dad, time for dinner. I've prepared your favorite meals..." Said Mia who was crouched in front of him and hold his sagging fingers tightly.

"Oh, yes." Mr. Philip caught off his reverie and rose slowly from his throne. Although he was almost 70 years old, his footsteps are so agile like a 40-year-old man in general. It was just the physical strength that he got from hoeing a few years old, but not comparable to the hurt he felt today.

"Mia, go to the market tomorrow and buy some seeds and gardens." The old man's exclamiation stopped her new hand from scooping the food into his mouth.
"Dad, tomorrow is a holiday. How about we take a trip to the beach? We also have not visited the beach for a long time, right?" Mia replied with her radiant face. But not with the old man in front of her. He was seen stopping his food activity and staring hard at his daughter.
"How dare you to think like that when this all happened to your brother!" There was a flash of sharp eyes radiated from Mr. Philip.
"Dad, why do you hard like this?! You are not aware that you have fallen into deep sorrow? Why is it so difficult to release sincerely sad departure?" She shouted that was seen holding back her tears.
"It's not until I know the culprit!"
"Dad, please. If you still like this then you will be drowned in misery..."
"..."
"Don't you just think about brother? How about me? Is it because I am not as competent and as brilliant as him, then I am not your precious child anymore? Are you still believe him even though he did not tell us for two years? "
"Do you doubt your brother who is so obedient?"
"Well, then I admit that I'm not the kind of obedient kid that you want anymore ..." Mia replied while leaving him with tears that had wet her face.
 
But just before Mia entered her room, the ringing of the phone rang loudly that broke the silence between them.
 
"Hello...."
"Wh-what?"
"Alright, thank you, sir ..."
"Dad, the suspect who killed brother has been found..."
"What did you say?! I will kill the man! " In a hurry, he was packing his bag.
"Stop dad!"
"You are out your mind! How can I let the savages live comfortably! "
"Dad stop it because brother is just as barbaric as they are!"
"Wh-what?"
"Ye-yeah, it's all happened be-because brother was ra-raping her daughter. So, stop this all dad!"
 
Suddenly Mr. Philip bowed weakly while feeling his chest all of a sudden tightness. Unknowingly he shed tears of disappointment and Mia who embraced her in the silence of the night.

 

Iffah Fikzia

13020115120003 


SHORT STORY (DRAFT)

The dim light of sun struck through the curtain into the room. The old man rubs his eyes and looking out from the window. The rain last night must be heavy. He can still found the dark cloud hanging on the sky. The quite house reminds him that it has been 10 years since his only daughter move to the city to work at there. He gets up from the bed and go downstair to make a cup of tea for his morning. His right hand hold the cup and the other fetch the newspaper under the door. Its already Thursday. There should be a letter from his daughter but there was none. "Perhaps Mary's busy or the postman was late," he speak out his mind. He spent most of all his day watching a game sport on TV or listening any news from his old radio. He is already on his late 70 to do lots of work. 

In the evening, he was making some dinner for himself when there was someone ring the doorbell. "I'm coming! I'm coming!" he mumbled and goes to the front door. It is so rare for him to have a guest at this time, he wonder who is it. "Good evening, Mr. Claire." said the young policemen. "Good morning. Can I help you something, sir?". The old man confused by the sudden visit. "May I speak with you inside the house. I am afraid I have a news for you." Both men went inside the house. The young policemen offers him two letters. It is Mary's letter and he cannot suspect the other. The young man can see the confused expression on Mr. Clare's old face when he received the letters.  Then suddenly the rain drops heavily followed by the sound of lightning. 

One by one people leaving Mr. Claire alone in the graveyard. The tears rolling down from his cheeks and drops in the ground. There is Mary's name on the stone in front of him. Three days has passed since he received the letter from his daughter on Thursday evening. It was hard for him when he should let his only daughter to go to work in the city. It even harder for him when he found that he should let his precious daughter leave him alone forever. If only he was young enough to make some money so their live wouldn't be that hard. If only he worked harder so his daughter wouldn't have to work to fullfil their living. If only he had lots of money so he can go with her and always beside her. There is only a feeling left in his heart. He is so disapointed to himself for make his daughter suffered so much. 


Isna Nuraeni
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Draft

         In many years ago, there was an old man who lived in a small village named South Shore, Blackpool, England. He was seventy three years old. He was a farmer in his neighbor's farm. His age was not young anymore, but he still worked to fulfill his family's needs. He lived in his house with his son. His wife passed away because of cancer. However, he could still feel happy as long as the son was always with him. His son was thirty one years old but he was still single. He did not want to marry any women because he was still looking for a job. He had worked in a traditional market but he resigned because he wanted to look for his father.

          However, the old man and his son did not have victual anymore. Their money was gone due to the increase of food prices. Forcefully, the son borrowed his friend's money to buy some food. He gave it to his father, then he went to a farm to get a job. He told to the owner of the farm that he needed a job. Fortunately, the owner accepted him directly as a new worker. The son was very happy. Then, he came back to his house and told it to his father that he got a job and he would work tomorrow.

            In tomorrow morning, the son went to the farm and he worked there while his father was in house. However, one day, the son was sick. Therefore, the father went to the farm where the son worked. He worked at the farm to earn much money because his son was sick. He worked carefully. He went to the farm early in the morning and came back to home in sunset.

One day, the son had not been sick anymore. He went to the farm and worked again with his father. However, one day, the farm was burnt by several strange people. The father and his son could not work there anymore. Then, the son permitted to go to a big city for a while to get a job. The father actually did not permit him because he loved his son very much. On the other hand, they needed money to buy the food.

            Three months later after the son went out from the house, the father missed his son very much. He always pried to God every night. He wanted to meet his son. He also could not eat any food because the money from his son was gone. On the other hand, the son was being a successful person. He worked as a senior staff of a big company. He got it because he was very diligent to do all his works. He had a big house and money. However, he forgot his father.

            One day, the father had a will to meet his son. He decided to go to the city to where his son went. He looked for his son carefully. He tried to meet his son but he could not. Then, he decided to sit in the sidewalk. He put his old hat and started to fan himself. Suddenly, there was a young man who was walking in the road. Both of them was looking at each other. The young man was his son! The father was very happy to meet his son. He kissed and cuddled his son. However, the son denied his father kisses and hugs. He felt ashamed because the father's appearance was like a bum. He threw his father down. Then, he left his father alone there. His father was very sad and he got his disappointment from his beloved son.

By : Vidya Muthya Citra (13020115120005)

disappointment

Budi Setiya Rahayu

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Disappointment

There is a man who living in Edensor, England. He is 70 years old which have two sons. He is a widower. Ten years ago, his wife was dead because of cancer. On the other hand, he don't want to get married again because he loves his wife so much and focuses to take care his children. Moreover, he is a retired teacher from senior high school. He becomes a farmer to suffice the tuition his children.

After graduate, both of his children work in a big company. The man is proud of them and very happy looking his children to be a successful person. However, when they find their happily and new family (getting marriage) they forget about their father. They rarely visit their father. Even, they never make a call for asking their father's condition. The old man feels so sad and disappointed. He always tries to make communication and ask his children to visit him in the long weekend, but it's never happen. His children just only visit him once a year in the Christmas and they just stay for 2 or 3 days.

Finally, the old man becomes ill. He still waiting for his sons and hoping they will coming. But in the end, they never come until he is death. He goes with his dissapointment

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Short Story (draft)

Ranita Camellia P

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The sun shone bright this morning. I can hear the birds singing outside my windows. I entered the living room. The sight of my wife sitting by the fireplace greeted me. She has knitting equipment by the table with two cups of what seems like warm tea. "Morning" she said simply still focusing on her own work. I just replied her by humming, acknowledging her greeting. I sit on the sofa by the table and reaching for a cup of warm tea that my wife has made. On the second sipping of my warm tea I suddenly just remembered something. Tomorrow is my turn to turn 76 and it just clicked in my mind that my wife probably knitting something for me as my present considering my age that turns me into something who can't withstand the cold weather. Thinking about it makes my heart warm that my wife is still the thoughtful person that I met 60 years ago. So, I decided not to disturb her with her work and planning to go outside checking my little farmhouse. Without her notice I walk outside grabbing my hat and put on my jacket.

 

It is chilly outside sure the sun had shone warmly but the wind is quite chilly that make me tighten my jacket. I walk through the small road guarded by the woody fences alongside the way. The grasses behind my feet are swaying because of the wind.


Re:

He was a man who born miserable life. His mother abandoned him right after she was giving birth to him. The poor economic conditions at the time made his mother to do such a lowly thing. Actually, he was one of her abandoned children. Giving birth in the dirtiest place of the town called market place; his mother was punished when people found out that she abandoned her child again. The crying baby lied on the dirty ground surrounded by disgusting pile of trash lead her to her tragic death, hanged on the town hall.

            The journey of his life was full of struggle and not so much happy moments. Once, he already reached one of his million dreams to be a businessman who had huge influence to the small town. It did not last longer as his ambition destroyed his whole life. Now he backed again to be an old man who had nothing. All that he could do was swimming in tears of disappointment and regretting his greediness.

            The same as most of people who had big dreams, on his early age, he also had them. Before trying to make them come true, he had to survive the harsh reality. Even, it was difficult for him to fill his hungry stomach every day. He lived in unhealthy crowded orphanage since he was born. Sometimes he stole bread and any other food from the stall of peddlers in the market. There were time he succeeded on stealing the food, but he get caught often and beaten by the owner.

            There was no reason for the poor not to be a hardworking person in order to have what people called an ideal life full of fancy things. He worked many jobs, such as a worker in leather producer house, a delivery man and a porter. He started to realize his own interest when he worked as delivery man. It was the first time for a poor teenager as him to be in that place, a bigger crowded market than on his small town.

            Amazed with the activity in the market, he found out that he wanted to be one of traders. "I need to sell something different yet popular from others" that was his very first thought when landed his foot on the market.

 

Rini
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On Tue, Feb 20, 2018 at 9:31 PM, healer moebius <angelnanda1233@gmail.com> wrote:

Food Storage

by: Rini (13020115120002)


You stay still gently

Solution for everyone

You can cease hunger easily

Provide the tiny things to the best one

 

You are my lifesaver

Like a person I love on my screen saver

When the day too earlier to be brighter

You are the real fighter

 

But you act the same from time to time

I need you to provide some cold lime

All you do is telling the same line

Thank you and see you next time

 

 

 

 



Draft.

Theme             : Disappointment

Character       : Man in 70s

Setting            : Village in England

(opening)

I am Thomas Jack. I live in a beautiful small village named Clovelly, in Torridge district, South West England. I have been living here for 30 years. My house is located near a long river and a wide farm. I am living alone shrouded in darkness. The reflection of my face reflected in the mirror accompanies me every night. Beside the old mirror, there are an old loyal wheelchair that always takes me everywhere and an old book note of mine that keeps my life story. Loneliness, disappointment, depression, sadness are my friends. Disappointment is my best friend that never wants to leave me alone. Every day, I feel disappointment when I am facing depression. It is very hard to forget that bad events that ever happened in my live. Perhaps if that mirror is alive, it will be the only one who can explain the story of my past in detail and in order. The story that is even people in my surrounding had never known about it. The story of how disappointed I was with myself, my parents, my life, and even God. "How can my life be filled with disappointment?" or "Am I cursed in my previous life?" are what I always think about.


Shanti Ayuni P. (13020115120012)

Draft Short Story

CREATIVE WRITING (Flash Fiction)

Theme             : Disappointment

Character         : Man in 70s

Setting             : Rural area in England

I smell the fresh air in this morning and I begin to start my activity like I usually do. I have an animal farm for raising my cows and sheep. I have certain cows that I have been raised since they were small and I do not want it being taken from anyone.

On the February 18th, I go out to the town for meeting my relatives, and I leave the farm to my child. I told him that someone will be come to our farm later to buy the cows that he wants. I also told him which cows that should be given to the buyer. After I got home for going for a while, I immediately check my farm to see my cows. I shock while seeing at my farm, my favourite cows is not at the place. I call my son and ask "Where is my cows, son?" then he reply "Someone bought your cows, isn't it? So, I told them to brought it with them". I sigh and ask him again "Didn't I told you to not give that cows to them? I told you to give another cows in the farm." He defended himself and say "How would I know to give which cows to them? All of them look the same"

I am disappointed with my son action. I am sure that I have told him before, even though I know it is also my fault to not differentiate the cows that should be given to the buyer.

Ø  Rizka Laksmi P

13020115120025

Draft

                The sound of logs being chopped echoed throughout the woods. The sun had yet to rise in the east, but old man James had already doing his chores. For the past few days, James had started to feel pain in his back after years of labor. The thought of retirement had crossed his head many times but he still could not make the decision. The money he earned daily was merely enough to cover his daily expenses and to put few change into his savings. He went on chopping log until a ray of light made its way between the trees. The log cracked into two as he landed his last blow and wiped the sweat off his brow. He reached for his thermos and poured the steaming hot coffee into a cup. After having breakfast and cup of coffee he headed back to do his other chores. James had been surviving from what the woods provided to him for years. He would go before sunrise and came back to his hut around three pm. Things were not like this before he was sent off to Normandy in World War II. James once owned a small bakery in the city, but ever since he came back from the war, he could not stand to be in crowded places around many people, so he sold his bakery and moved to the wood near a small village.

                James knew it was midday when he looked into the sky. Years of doing his routine in the wood gave him the ability to tell time without watch and sharpened his senses. On the way back to his hut he stopped by the river to collect the fishes from his trap that he laid yesterday. When he arrived at his hut, he was surprised to find his son sitting in the sofa. "Hi pop, long time no see, I see that you have been doing fine here," he said. "What are you doing here? How did you get in?" "C'mon pop is that the way to greet your son?" "It doesn't matter, I want you to get out now!" James said loudly. "easy pop, easy."

Hilfi


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Creative Writing


TITLE : Country for Old Man

Birds chirping through the frosty wind, flowing through the silent village. "Stardew Alley, always with the same old days." Says Gary. His voice can be heard anywhere, since there's not so many people around. Gary is a 70 years old man who trying to make a good living, though he's a little bit lonely. Just like this village, Stardew Alley, who always been a loner except in holiday.
One day, Gary decided to leave the village to get new acquaintances. Since Gary is unable to walk far, he considered to rent a horse from the local farmers. "Where are you going, sir? Is it okay to leave all by yourself", asked the farmer. He replied, "Don't bother, i'll live longer." Then he started to leave the village.
            He ride through the green-vast countryside, feeling the wind flowing smoothly through his wrinkles. Suddenly, the horse walk slower, then stop moving. Gary pats the stallion's mane, trying to make it move again. But it doesn't work, then he chose to leave the horse, and walk by himself. There's no people around yet, so he has to continue the journey. He began to regret his decision to leave the horse, then like to have a chance to ride it again. Unfortunately, the stallion was gone. By the footsteps, it looks like it went back to the village.
            Gary was sad, confuse, and anxious. He didn't know that the journey would be this tiring. Also, the rain is pouring heavily so he decided to rest under the nearest hut. His wrinkles got tightened by the freezing wind of the rain. He can't take it anymore, then he fell asleep. When his eyes opened, things are more familiar to him. There's a man next to him, saying "Yes, sir. I'm home." Gary replied, "Oh its you--Harry." Birds chirping through the frosty wind, while the man help Gary to get up. "Stardew Alley, always with the same old days."

Rangga Widhiarso Prakoso
NIM 13020115120030

The prayer of the Old Man

Nur Nindya Kirana
13020115120023

An old man in his late 70, looking very old and fragile, is sitting on the chair right at the front yard of his house. He dress sharply this morning in purpose, since he is very much affirmative that his son would come. It is Christmas, his son would surely come home. It has been twenty five years since the precious one left the hometown, moving to the capital city becoming a proud man. Starting from 8 o'clock in the morning, the man has already been waiting for the return of his only son, hoping that he would show up.
Time falls way too quickly, it is getting dark and the familiar face has not yet seen anywhere near. The man starts to recall, thinking of what he has done wrong in lifetimes before. Time is turned back when the man was still proud and tough, a notable police man living in the town of a never dull moment; Cotswolds. The man was very hard on his son, started since his wife passed away. He loves his son more than anything in the world, he just does not want his son to fail in life and that is why he was very hard on him.
The man starts to recall every memory of his son from the moment he was born to the world, up until now he has grown to be a man in middle 40s, already having a family of his own. The last time the man heard, his son is a giant culinary bussiness man in the capital city, a man with no less of abundant money. That is exactly what the man always wants; his son to be a success man. It is well proven now. What the man regrets is he never gave his son the chance of exploring his talents. The man pushed his son very hard to become a man like him, that is what he disagreed because deep down he wanted to be a professional cook.
William is no longer a proud and a tough man. He is old, sad, and weary, especially since his son; Richard left home 25 years ago and has not yet returned. He sends money and clothes, whatever a man in his late 70 needs, but he never comes home. Deep down, Richard does not hate his father, he just does not know how to put the pieces back together, too much has been missed and lost. Deep down, William does not hate his son, he just wants his son to come home, he just wants to have his son embraced because he loves him. William loves his son beyond anything in the world. The man does not need money, the man needs his son back. Here sits a disappointed man in his late 70, longing for his son to find forgiveness and come home to see the old man again before the winter takes him forever. Praying, he calls Richard's name to come home, hoping to spend a new year's evening together in jolly.

Who Am I

Maria Friska Theresa L.
13020115120024

When this eyes are unable to look away, and this soul is already hobbled, I know it's the time to stop. When there are no more leftovers behind the hood, who cares anyway? Family ? It is a foreign word to me. Neighbours? Just looking at me, they're disgusted. I miss that time, where the people respected me, allowed me to walk freely without moving away from me. I miss you, too. Someone who never lost from this thought, not out of love, but of the pain of this feeling. I blame you. Because of you, my name is no longer Henry, but The Old Madman. Why do you make slanders that never dissapear, so until now all leave me. I have nobody to share my story, how this possible to make a clarification. Because of you I blame God, blame this life, blame all who blame me, but it was all in vain. I am still staying alone and nobody accompanying me until the rest of me.

Who exactly am I? Only a fragile piece of wood is eaten by termites. I can not even stand up right. I am old, weak, and helpless. But The Great Spirit still loves me, Nature is the friend He sends to me in the world. They greeted me every time. Only the peace and tranquility I feel while in the midst of nature. I am coming closer in their life and presenting to seduce the majesty of your loving soul. Planting the water-binding trees in the forest area, that's what I've been doing all my life when everyone has left me. State land is not a sure result I enjoy. Not a year or two years I did the things, but it is been 19 years. Not only planting, but also caring for and raising them, including stitching or planting again if the previous plant died. I do this all alone for I realize that I live from nature, not from humans. I live from the land and will return to the ground.

I wrote this letter so that people would know that I had lived as a self-conscious human being, and knew that I was dying. Maybe when this letter is found, I'm already gone. What I want at the end of my life is not gold and gems, but the concern of you who read this letter. Bury my body, more worthy than to bury a dead cat. I just need you to show your humanities as the real human beings and to show to The Majesty that your positions as special beings, still worth. One more thing, tell my ex-wife that I forgive her. My disappointment in the past let it be a life lesson for me, for her, and for everyone. In the end, I hope what I did in this village forest can be exploited by the villagers, and I would be very grateful if you could also take care of it.

Short Story (draft)

Aifida Resyana Palupi

13020115120032

 

There is an old man who lives in a small house in Dhedam village, Northeast Essex, England. His name is Jack. He is an grumpy lonely old man with a white beard. He does not have a wife or  even another to live with. Moreover, he has been alone  for years. His life is full of sorrow and loneliness. He has been saving a wound for many years alone. Jack spent his time to plant a black rose. He like it so much because he feels that his life is as dark as the black rose. That is so black, dark and cool likes his soul. He lives alone without any hope. He does not have a friend to share anything. 


Short Story Draft

The Chain

1. Beginning
There was a rich man named Gladio who lived in Hunmanby, North Yorkshire with his 2 children, Gilbert and Gerald. His wife was already dead because of cancer 30 years ago. So he worked everyday to make his children happy.

2. Mid
One day, Gladio knew that his time will come soon. He gave his children all of his money and will. He hoped Gilbert and Gerald could use the money properly.  Instead of doing what his father want, Gilbert and Gerald spent all of it for pleasure. Gladio knew what Gilbert and Gerald did. Gladio felt so dissapointed, so much that he could not bear. After that he died because of heart attack.

3. End
Gilbert and Gerald become so guilty, they promised to be a better man, but it was too late. They had nothing left. The only thing left was his father dissapointment and poverty that would haunt them soon. Everything changed, they could not bear all of it. They decided to take their own life, joining his parents and asking forgiveness.

Ricky Giovani Reynaldi (13020115120027)

Draft

The morning wind blows brushing my face. I am able to smell the dew of wet grass. This morning is always the same morning as yesterday, last week and last month. I sit on the bench I made from maple wood behind my house. It is sturdy and well-shaped. I let it without any polish to preserve the original colour. I take my first sip of a cup of jasmine-flavoured tea while enjoying sunny day. Sunday is always the day that I wait for every week. My only son promised that he would visit me on the second Sunday of this month. Since today is the day, I decided not to go fishing on a river near to my cottage. I like fishing and gardening whenever I have free time to refresh my mind. I feel so excited that I finally can meet my son. I am going to tell him that I have planted daisy and daffodil in backyard. Small talk is very precious for us, although we just talk about flowers. Both of us like flowers so much. That is the reason why he decided to be a florist in the town. He sometimes sends me a bucket of flower. As time passed by, apparently I have been waiting for 4 hours. It is longer than I expected before. He has not married yet in the age of 35. I hope he is going to be married soon and live happily with his family. I often think how it feels having grandchildren.

When I am drowning into my fantasy, a postman suddenly comes to my house. He is Peter. He waves his right hand and greets me. "Hi, Martin? How are you?" "I am fine, thanks. How about you?" I said while standing to approach him. "Sunny day, huh? Nice day for fishing", as he hands me a post card.

"I am not going to go fishing today. My son will visit me. So, I prefer to stay at home." He raises his right eyebrow. "Alright, I am leaving. Many postcards need to deliver". I nod and smile at him. I enter the house then take a sit on the sofa. I read the message carefully. My body goes limp. My hands are trembling. My heart beats faster. I try to calm myself.

The post card is sent by my sister who lives in the same town as my son.

 



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Elsa
13020115120006
Sastra Inggris/A